But even in such simple cases care must be taken to avoid blurring the picture. Here is another sentence that must be straightened out carefully before we can get the meaning: With sloping masts and dipping prow, The ship drove fast, loud roar'd the blast, -COLERIDGE: The Rime of the Ancient Mariner. Rewrite the above in the natural order of subject, modifiers, and predicate. Note also how the difficulty is increased because of the subordinate clause: As who pursued with yell and blow But we are greatly helped when we recognize that the sentence is inverted. We note that "With sloping masts," etc., is incomplete in its meaning, and hence we look forward for the group that completes the sense, which we find in "The ship drove fast," etc. REVIEW EXERCISES So saying, a noble stroke he lifted high, -MILTON: Paradise Lost. High in front advanced, The brandished sword of God before them blazed Fierce as a comet. -MILTON: Paradise Lost. Him, Menelaus, loved of Mars, beheld Advancing with large strides before the rest. -The Iliad (Bryant's translation). Me master years a hundred since from my parents sunder'd, A little child, they caught me as the savage beast is caught, Then hither me across the sea the cruel slaver brought. -WHITMAN: Ethiopia Saluting the Colors. On the sea and at the Hogue, sixteen hundred ninetytwo, Did the English fight the French,-woe to France! And, the thirty-first of May, helter-skelter through the blue, Like a crowd of frightened porpoises a shoal of sharks pursue, Came crowding ship on ship to St. Malo on the Rance, With the English fleet in view. -BROWNING: Hervé Riel. Whither, 'midst falling dew, While glow the heavens with the last steps of day, Far, through their rosy depths, dost thou pursue Thy solitary way? -BRYANT: To a Waterfowl. Little thinks, in the field, yon red-cloaked clown, Of thee from the hill-top looking down. -EMERSON: Each and All. Thus while they look'd, a flourish proud, And sacbut deep, and psaltery, And war-pipe with discordant cry, The whilst the bells, with distant chime, And thus the Lindesay spoke. -SCOTT: Marmion. As night drew on, and, from the crest -Whittier: Snow-Bound. It little profits that an idle king, By this still hearth, among these barren crags, That hoard, and sleep, and feed, and know not me. How changed is here each spot man makes or fills! In the two Hinkseys nothing keeps the same; The village street its haunted mansion lacks, And from the sign is gone Sibylla's name, And from the roofs the twisted chimney-stacks— Are ye too changed, ye hills? See, 'tis no foot of unfamiliar men To-night from Oxford up your pathway strays! Thyrsis and I; we still had Thyrsis then. -ARNOLD: Thyrsis. Others for language all their care express, -POPE: An Essay on Criticism. All night, the dreadless angel, unpursued, Through Heaven's wide champaign held his way, till Morn, Waked by the circling Hours, with rosy hand Unbarred the gates of light. -MILTON: Paradise Lost. CHAPTER VI DENOTATION While we have been studying the preceding chapters we have found ourselves learning to read with greater ease and thoroughness; however, it is quite possible to understand the principles and yet miss the meaning. Merely to group correctly does not necessarily imply reading with understanding. In the lines: No habitation can be seen; but they Who journey thither find themselves alone With a few sheep, with rocks and stones, and kites It is in truth an utter solitude; -WORDSWORTH: Michael. there is a word whose meaning in this place is entirely different from its usual one. Can you find it? How could the place be without any habitation, one where those who journey thither find themselves alone with a few sheep, etc., and yet with "kites" sailing overhead in the sky? Would not sailing kites presuppose someone sailing them? Look up this word in the dictionary and note how that one word affects the picture. Another example: Do you know the pile-built village where the sago dealers trade? |