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Thou dar’st not this, and that to prove more fortunes
O Marcius, Marcius !
(183) A root of ancient envy. If Jupiter
Should from yond cloud speak divine things,
say 6718 true," I'd not believe them more
Than thee, all-noble Marcius.] So the lines are arranged in the folio; and, I believe, rightly, though a ditferent arrangement has been attempted. But the second line is certainly mutilated.-Pope gave
“ Should from yon cloud speak to me things divine." — Qy.
“Should from out yonder cloud speak divine things”! (Iu Hamlet, act iii. sc. 2, we have “yonder cloud.")—In the third line Walker (Crit. Exam., &c., vol. iii. p. 209) would read “ believe him more.”
(184) And scard the moon with splinters;] The folio (with its old spelling) has “And scarr'd the Moone, &c.; which is retained by Malone and Mr. Collier (the former innocently remarking that a line in Richard III.,
Amaze the welkin with your broken staves," “certainly adds some support” to the reading “scar'd" !).—1865. Mr. Collier now gives, with his Ms. Corrector, “scard."
I lov'd the maid I married; never man
You bless me, gods !
(185) no quarrel else] So the third folio.—The earlier folios have "no other quarrell else."
(186) o'er-bear.) So some copies of the folio : other copies have erronepusly " ore-beate.”—Mr. Grant White adopts Jackson's reading, "o'erbear't.”—“The pronoun, I think, can scarcely be dispersed with here, but it should be her.” W. N. LETTSOM.
499) But come in:] Mr. W. N. Lettsom suggests “ But now come in.” -The usual alteration is “But come, come in.
Say yea to thy desires. A thousand welcomes !
[Exeunt Coriolanus and Aufidius.— The
two Servants come forward. First Serv. Here's a strange alteration !
Sec. Serv. By my hand, I had thought to have strucken him with a cudgel ; and yet my mind gave me his clothes made a false report of him.
First Serv. What an arm he has ! he turned me about with his finger and his thumb as one would set up a top.
a Sec. Serv. Nay, I knew by his face that there was something in him : he had, sir, a kind of face, methought,-I cannot tell how to term it.
First Serv. He had so; looking as it were,— Would I were hanged, but I thought there was more in him than I could think.
Sec. Serv. So did I, I'll be sworn : he is simply the rarest man i' the world.
First Serv. I think he is : but a greater soldier than be you wot on.
First Serv. Nay, not so neither : but I take him to be the greater soldier.
Sec. Serv. Faith, look you, one cannot tell how to say that: for the defence of a town our general is excellent.
First Serv. Ay, and for an assault too.
Re-enter third Servant.
Third Serv. O slaves, I can tell you news,-news, you rascals !
First and Sec. Serv. What, what, what ? let's partake.
Third Serv. I would not be a Roman, of all nations; I had as lief be a condemned man.
First and Sec. Serv. Wherefore ? wherefore ?
(188) wot on.] The folio has “wot one."
Third Serv. Why, here's he that was wont to thwack our general,—Caius Marcius.
First Serv. Why do you say “thwack our general”?
Third Serv. I do not say “thwack our general;" but he was always good enough for him.
Sec. Serv. Come, we are fellows and friends: he was ever too hard for him; I have heard him say so himself.
First Serv. He was too hard for him directly, to say the troth on't: before Corioli he scotched him and notched him like a carbonado.
Sec. Serv. An he had been cannibally given, he might have broiled (189) and eaten him too.
First Serv. But, more of thy news ?
Third Serv. Why, he is so made on here within as if he were son and heir to Mars; set at upper end o' the table; no question asked him by any of the senators, but they stand bald before him: our general himself makes a mistress of him ; sanctifies himself with's hand, and turns up the white o' the eye to his discourse. But the bottom of the news is, our general is cut i' the middle, and but one half of what he was yesterday; for the other has half, by the entreaty and grant of the whole table. He'll go, he says, and sowl the porter of Rome gates by the ears : he will mow all down before him, and leave his passage polled.
Sec. Serv. And he's as like to do't as any man I can imagine.
Third Serv. Do't! he will do't; for, look you, sir, he has as many friends as enemies; which friends, sir, as it were, durst not, look you, sir, show themselves, as we term it, his friends whilst he's in directitude.(190)
First Serv. Directitude! what's that?
(189) broiled] The folio has “boyld.”
(190) directitude.) “I suspect the author wrote “discreditude ;' a made word instead of discredit. He intended, I suppose, to put an uncommon
I word into the mouth of this servant, which had some resemblance to setise; but could hardly have meant that he should talk absolute non
" MALONE.—Mr. Collier's Ms. Corrector substitutes" dejectitude.” - Mr. Singer (Shakespeare Vindicated, &c., p. 223) says, much too confidently, “ There can be no doubt that the Servant is intended to blunder in the use of directitude,' which he mistakes for discreditude."
Third Serv. But when they shall see, sir, his crest up again, and the man in blood, they will out of their burrows, like conies after rain, and revel all with him.
First Serv. But when goes this forward ?
Third Serv. To-morrow; to-day; presently; you shall have the drum struck up this afternoon: 'tis, as it were, a parcel of their feast, and to be executed ere they wipe their lips.
Sec. Serv. Why, then we shall have a stirring world again. This peace is nothing, (191) but to rust iron, increase tailors, and breed ballad-makers.
First Serv. Let me have war, say I; it exceeds peace as far as day does night; it's spritely, waking, (192) audible, and full of vent. (193) Peace is a very apoplexy, lethargy; mulled,(195) deaf, sleepy, (196) insensible; a getter of more bastard children than war's (197) a destroyer of men.
Sec. Serv. 'Tis so: and as war, in some sort, may be said to be a ravisher, so it cannot be denied but peace is a great maker of cuckolds.
(191) This peace is nothing,] The sentence being perhaps mutilated, Capell printed “ This peace is good for nothing :” the earlier insertiou was “ worth."
(192) spritely, waking,). The folio has “sprightly walking ;” which Mr. Staunton retains, and explains "quick moving or marching."
(195) full of vent.] i.e. “full of rumour, full of materials for discourse." JOHNSON.- Mr. Collier's Ms. Corrector reads "full of vaunt.”
(194) lethargy;] Walker (Crit. Exam., &c., vol. i. p. 92) queries "a lethargy."
(196) mulled,] i.e., according to Hanmer, "softened and dispirited, as wine is when burnt and sweetened. Lat. mollitus."— Walker would substitute “mute :" see his Crit. Exam., &c., vol. i. pp. 92, 188, vol. ii. p. 49.
(106) sleepy,] The folio has “sleepe.”—Corrected in the third folio.
(197) war's] The folio has “warres” both here and in the next speech. "I should have persisted in adherence to the reading of Mr. Pope [“ war's”] had not a similar irregularity in speech occurred in All's well that ends well, act ii. sc. I, where the Second Lord says, 'O, 'tis brave wars !' as we have here 'wars may be said to be a ravisher."" STEEVENS.
- But the two passages are not similar; and besides, though our author frequently uses *“ wars” for “war," the first words of the present speech, “Let me have war” (the folio “Warre"), prove that in the concluding portion of it he employed the singular.—“In our passage War is personified and is opposed to Peace. It is surely impossible that, under such circunstances, Shakespeare would have used the plural, particularly when he had begun with the singular." W. N. LETTSOM.